Random WIP: Redemption Earned

Random WIP: Redemption Earned

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Ralf was built to be a warrior.  Trained from birth; he felt himself above all.  He took what he wanted when he wanted.  He was the warrior leading armies into battles.  Then one of his victims killed him and the Fates and Death judged him to live forever; until he gained the forgiveness of his murderer.  Fast forward three thousand years and he has seen would be gods, the creation of religions, the fall of empires and many other ‘historical’ events of humanity’s past.  He has learned the best and worst of humanity.  He gets notified his soul mate has once again been reborn 21 years ago.  Now he must win her or face another two thousand years alone.
Agnes has always had this sense of Déjà vu as she was growing up.  Now she is 21 and set to go off to Yale Law School.  Then this man named Ralf comes into her life.  Always there; if she was paranoid she would say he was stalking her.  Eventually, he starts to sit next to her at the coffee shop she goes to after class and they start to talk.  Then he tells her something that she can’t wrap her head around.  He is over two thousand years old and he must earn his redemption through her.  When she is told she gets her memories back and runs.  Will she allow Ralf to gain his redemption?  Or will she allow him to live a lonely and cursed life?

1 Comment

  1. Anonymous says:

    I always enjoy stories that deal with gods. This has promise! Good luck!


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