Short story Idea: Feedback Request

So, I have a short story idea, here is the opening. Thoughts?

There is a time where all must die. All must be reborn and start anew. However, I never imagined I would see this ending.  I stand here choking on ash, I watch helplessly as the great tree Yggdrasil burns; and I remember what lead to me lighting the fire of rebirth.

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