Short story Idea: Feedback Request

So, I have a short story idea, here is the opening. Thoughts?

There is a time where all must die. All must be reborn and start anew. However, I never imagined I would see this ending.  I stand here choking on ash, I watch helplessly as the great tree Yggdrasil burns; and I remember what lead to me lighting the fire of rebirth.

Published by krischarlesauthor

Kris Charles is a pen name. She lives in Iowa. She enjoys music, baking, and playing with a Pup named Milo Roy. Katy Lily was her first major story, starting in 1992, it was told as a verbal story to her youngest brother. Parts were used as short stories for classes from grade school to College. And now, all ten year of Katherine Lillian’s Life will be published for the world to read. Kris is also the author of A Guardian’s Life Saga; first novel is The Seven Deadlies. The author of The Keepers Trilogy; first novel is The Keepers and the Sisters of Lilith. Others coming soon include Darkened Grace and Praying.

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